by Ya----Na Oct 15, 2017
category :
Life, society /
other
It's midnight |
by Meena Krish
I like the title and I also noticed how you ended the first line with the |
by Ya----Na
Thank you so much Ms Meena. I just hope government or social welfare organizations can do something to make their lives better and easier. |
by naaz
This time, I want to start with title of the poem. You chose decent title as it didn't bring any disrespect to them. |
by Ya----Na
Thanks naaz I forgot to thank you. |
by Ya----Na
Thanks to milly, Michael and Naomi. |
An exceptional free verse piece. Very enjoyable read. Milly x |
Free Verse! |