Oh goodness, this is sad. So much longing for once what was and so much sadness in how the demise of this relationship went. Beautifully written, visuals are spot on-well done-

Sad poem but relatable

Wonderfully descriptive u requited love poem. This is beautiful:

I am busy in drinking my heart
to
forget the fear of drowning in your
lies again

your memories always come along with winds of the past
and turn into ashes the remains of my soul.

Wonderful

Thanks, Brenda, Paul and Mark...

"your memories always come along with winds of the past
and turn into ashes the remains of my soul"

Beautifully worded. So sad, but with eyes wide open. Well done.

Catherine x