Comments : Ode to Phil (my husband)

  • 7 years ago

    by ddavidd

    Your hummer in your poetry is so refreshing. It is not forced or fake... I think it is because you are not fake yourself. That is why you can talk so deep within such simple words.

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Frank, thank you so much. I'm really pretty basic, lol. It's kind of what you see is what you get with me. I wear my heart on my sleeve and my poetry reflects that. I appreciate your kind words-

  • 7 years ago

    by Mark

    Lovely ode with some tongue twisters, humor (lol rack...dollar store) with a great flow

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you Mark! When he first met me I think he thought me quite mad lol. He's gotten used to my ways since then, thankfully.

  • 7 years ago

    by Paul Hirst

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    Thank You

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much Paul!

  • 7 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    hahah ... lots of lovely little 'isms' between you and Phil ... personal though it is, I loved reading it ... really lovely Brenda :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you Miss Kitty, we started our relationship with a wonderful sense of humor, it's always a laugh between us.

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    I absolutely adore this B its nice to know you have now found your soul mate after the heartaches of the past
    Much love
    Em x

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Awww thank you Em. He truly is my soul mate.

  • 7 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Ohhh what an ode.. love is brilliant..
    Well written..

    Well done brenda

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Nams, thank you so much! This was written with a giggle and a smile and lots of love.