by Mark
What I like here is the change in mood from the pain to this line.. |
Thanks mark. It was an emotional rollarcoaster for me myself, but I’m getting off. |
by Ya----Na
Bt, I loved the way you started with a sad tune but end on positive thinking. |
Thank you! |
by Ben Pickard
BT, I hope someone nominates this (I am out) as it truly is an inspirational piece of writing and a fine lesson to anyone who feels low: things do get better, we just have to keep keeping on and the sun will shine again. |
Thank you Ben! I find that some of my best pieces happen to be about myself, and the struggle of finding and loving me. But I’m getting there! |
by Brenda
Love This! It's all about walking away, becoming stronger and finally being able to live again. Well done - |
That it is, Brenda. Thank you :) |
by Michael
BT |
Thank you micheal! |
Clichés are always clichés for a reason ... and 'time is a healer' is so true here ... this is a lovely poem that depicts that awful process really well :-) |
Thank you!! |
by mossgirl19
Aww, such a raw and strong write, BT. Fighting! |
Yes! Thank you mossgirl :) |