by Robert Long Oct 17, 2017
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
everyone knew |
An interesting piece. For me I felt the positivity in the first three stanzas was a good introduction. The next two take the reader to the realisation that even though the boy is a lot older he still can't shake how the bullying felt and so is now depressed. |
by Robert Long
that is so true. It just takes the little things to make a day. It takes bigger scales to keep it like that and thats the point people dont understand. Thank you for the feedback milly and i hope you have a great rest of your life. |