Michael - can i have whatever your taking or drinking! These poems you have been writing are amazing..
We all need to be rid of the liers and cheats from our lives!

I love the layout and rhyming in this.. Well done

Michael, wonderful write! I think it would be wonderful to be able to "sniff" the bad ones out. I love your rhyming through-out. Well done-

Love the title, the content, the rhyming, the layout, the humour, AND the message! Just brilliant Michael! Clever and funny :-) x
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Fantastic piece Michael if only we could smell the lies and the heartaches people put us through before they do

All the best
Em

Michael! Wouldn't it be good to have such perception. Their is a lighter side to this rhyme yet the message is you may have been hurt by someone deceptive. Always a fan of your writes

Flows like a river.
Another wonderful write and I completely agree with Naomi, can we have whatever your taking or drinking!

This is so wonderfully rhymed Michael. Love the message too.

Michael, I always find it hard to write in aabb rhyme scheme.
You did it so well.
Almost in every stanza you used a synonym of unpleasant which clearly shows how much this person has upset you.
I wish we all could do that, smell people lies, but just like you we all are afraid or tired of sniffing it again and again that unpleasant smell of lies.
If We could detect the difference between the truth and lies, good and bad, light and darkness, God and devil, we could have saved our heart from all the suffering deceit brings.
For once we can swallow the truth no matter how bitter it tastes or breathe in it even if it suffocates us.
But the unpleasant smell of lies is always too hard to endure.
To be honest, it is a poem speaks for the simple things happen in our lives.
All of us get deceive by others in one way or another somewhere in our life.
But what made this poem extraordinary is your choice of words.
Your wisdom.
Though it's a poem about lies, but you wrote the truth.
And there could be no end to the interpretation of this poem.
But that's all from me.
Forgive me, if I have gone beyond any limits.

I always say and feel that kids and animals have a great sense to tell the difference between good and bad. I get upset when people say dogs or cats have no sense. They know when something is not right or right with you. Thank you for sharing. Hugs to you