Comments : Dark Sounds

  • 7 years ago

    by MoonMaiden

    I really wish i could nominate this. Makes me think about not thinking so much about everything..if that made any sense. Lol. Anyways, this is excellence at its finest! 5/5

    • 7 years ago

      by Justen Smith

      Thank you, my stuff is a long way from quality but I'll keep practicing and keep writing. It has helped me allot if nothing else. :-)

  • 7 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Ah. So true! Why don't we think of that when those awful fears and memories are haunting us! Yes, just having those thoughts means we've survived! Brilliant Justen x
    =^.^=

    • 7 years ago

      by Justen Smith

      Every painful memory is a trophy of survival. They make us who we are and all we can hope is they make us a better person. :-)

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    All so very true Justin
    And all wrapped up well in a noisy poem :)
    Michael

    • 7 years ago

      by Justen Smith

      Thank you very much, I truly appreciate you taking the time to read my words. :-)

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Justen, silence can either destroy you or re-energize you. You really touched on this nicely. When you get older there's going to be times when you will welcome the quiet. Well done-

    • 7 years ago

      by Justen Smith

      I have spent from 19 to 27 in the silence described above....it's been painful...I long for noise. :-)