by Mark
Great write Dagmar! I agree, red can mean strength, determination as well as passion, desire, and love. Not necessarily anger...you mixed this color well with your thoughts. |
Thank you Mark |
by BlueJay
The first two lines instantly had me hooked, and I love intros with that kind of power. Note that in the final stanza there is a typo in the word strength (from getting your ideas out so quickly I'm sure). And something about the last stanza does not quite make sense, I had to read it by itself before I could figure out where you were going. "Red is the color where my life begins" - incredible! |
I love this Dagmar. It's so true that sometimes you have to get all the way down to rock bottom before you realise that you are stronger than you thought! The last line is perfect for this poem :-) x |
Loved this. "When using red on my canvas. Why would you assume I'm angry?" Strong opening lines. I always connect red with being a happy colour like a cheerful red flame or Santa Claus. For me too it signifies a bright future. |
by Michael
Miss Dagamr |
Thank you all so kindly for your lovely comments. |