by BlueJay
This was interesting to read, the format felt a little boring but that's probably just me. The flow was okay and the rhymes were alright. I like the direction the author was trying to venture in. |
by Mark
Search for happiness and the meaning of life leaving 'impressions on this land.' Beautiful Scott, great to read another poem from you. |
An optimistic piece with the treasure map to happiness. Most enjoyable piece. Milly x |
by Ya----Na
Scott, very well you explained the true purpose of our life and how to be or remain happy through out this journey called life. |
The journey of life you described it in a wonderful way. All the best. |
by CJ Maleney
Judges comment |
A Splendid Write!!! |