Michael,
I was going ot break this down, but i dont know where to start... from start to finish this is amazing.

Well done.

This is everything I had hope life to be before it lead me to write ‘Poseidon’s Realm’

Your poetry is beautiful; so literary. It caresses my sense and calms me, every time.

Thank you.

Just beautiful Michael, I agree with Risqué on the effect your poetry has. Big fan as always.

Michael!
"Tiny segments of hope
and promises drizzle a
sublime marinade
upon my heart"

A heart marinaded in hope ... that's just stunning. A beautiful, swoon-worthy poem! Love it! :-) x
=^.^=

Thank you Miss Kitty K

Lovely comments as always, mean a lot and 'swoon-worthy' wonderful :)x

What I love about your work, Michael, is that there is never a word wasted, it seems. Every stanza and every line is always filled with sumptuous descriptions and something relevant. This is no exception.

Take care,

Ben

Thank you Ben :)

Michael, I just want to follow that trail which leads me to the place where you hide your fruitful petals of imagination.

What a beautiful piece. "Promises drizzle a sublime marinade upon my heart" what amazing imagery. A well deserving nomination. Milly x

Dear Michael what can I say this is absolutely beautiful and I have to agree with all the others. Glad to see it was nominated. Add to my favorite. All the very best.

This is beautiful ! Left me speechless :)

WONDERFUL!!!