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Life is very precious and we are granted only one. We live and learn and take it one moment at the time. Thank you for sharing. All the very best

I liked this very much and actually the repetition didnt annoy me. For me I have found that repetition works very well when used with shorter lines. (But as in all pieces of art people have different preferences) . I think it's punchy and offers up valuable advice. One of your best more recent pieces. Milly x

While I truly enjoy the concept of this piece and how much voice and personality you were able to pack into such a short thing, I do have some criticism.

The first two stanzas should not both start with time is time is, if you wanted to give that more power you should have separated them a little more so that the repetition gained more oomph and intention. Also, the lack of punctuation and capitalization thing- while that is totally stylistic and up to you (believe me, I'm all for it) it did make this piece feel as though it was missing something. Like a gumbo or soup that has meat and veggies but no spices at all. (I hope that makes sense.)

I'd love to read more of your work when I have a little more time, but I think you definitely have a knack for this!