Comments : Secret

  • 7 years ago

    by Robert Long

    I really dont know what to say. Its a great poem with excellent story. Made me want to cry because ive been there way too many times. Good job and keep it up. Love it :)

    • 7 years ago

      by Rey Severs

      Thank you so much, I wrote this when very upset so I am glad it reflects the nature of the mood.

  • 7 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    *absurb = absurd

    Relatable and timeless; secrets and information have always been valuable, and unfortunately people change... someone who was trustworthy yesterday will not be today. That really does have a negative impact on how we interact with others. When we finally do find that person to trust, and that sentiment is taken advantage of, it stings. This poem adequately described that, well done.

    IdTakeABulletForYou

    • 7 years ago

      by Rey Severs

      Thanks, didn't catch that one, d and b look similar (dyslexia).I also appreciate the feedback from one of my favorite writers! :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Oh betrayal is so hard to forgive or repair. Your hurt is so well depicted here. A sad but great write! :-)
    =^.^=