Breathe Me

by Brise   Oct 21, 2017


You’re suffocating me in your fever
Baby let me breathe you I’m so eager
Your lips intoxicating upon my skin
I’m dampened by our sin

Please let me feel you,
let me taste you
And savor you

Smother me in your fervor
Take me to the edge further and further
Taste me, drink me, I’m burning
Please baby I’m yearning
Yearning and pleading
Your warmth upon me I’m needing

I’m shaking in anticipation
My arousal dying in starvation
So I beg you and plea,
Please baby, breathe me

    report violation
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  • 6 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    I completely agree with Ben. You tried to cover it well, but the content was too hot.
    Once again, a very unique style of representing your emotions through poetry.

    • 6 years ago

      by Brise

      Thank you :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I did enjoy...and now I need a cold shower, lol.
    No, sensually done and well written.

    Take care and all the best,

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by Brise

      Thank you Ben ! Always glad to hear from you :)

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Yay...well yes this was a little hot to handle. Nice flow, with beautiful subtle rhyming. Enjoyed it.

    • 7 years ago

      by Brise

      Thank you :)

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