Fall

Hopeful

A lovely short piece on nature
Michael :)

Hello hope. Beautiful haiku. The first line is very nice. The beautiful visual is aided by the second line too. Although I feel something in the second line is hindering the flow. Not really sure if 'softly flutter' is okay. The third line is a nice crisp end. It left an impression, and for me a good haiku does. Well-written.

Very nicely written. Take care

I actually had a visual reading this. Which doesnt happen much. I love this! Great job.