by MoonMaiden
I actually had a visual reading this. Which doesnt happen much. I love this! Great job. |
Very nicely written. Take care |
by mossgirl19
Hello hope. Beautiful haiku. The first line is very nice. The beautiful visual is aided by the second line too. Although I feel something in the second line is hindering the flow. Not really sure if 'softly flutter' is okay. The third line is a nice crisp end. It left an impression, and for me a good haiku does. Well-written. |
by Michael
Hopeful |