by CJ Maleney Oct 23, 2017
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Around our axis we rotate |
by Em
This is all it's sadness is one of the most sincere and beautiful pieces I have read here in some time |
by CJ Maleney
Thanks Em |
by Brenda
Craig, a fascinating write. I love how you compared science and gravity to a lost relationship. Very creative! I'm sorry this person is not in your life anymore, I hope you are doing well. Hugs- |
by CJ Maleney
Thanks Bren |
So educational Craig, but also I love how it's not entirely clear whether your world is better or worse without this person in it :-) |
by CJ Maleney
Glad you enjoyed. I am a bit of a science geek lol |
by Michael
Craig, wow! fella what a great ending with such a good rhythm throughout. |
by CJ Maleney
Cheers dude. |
by Ben Pickard
Craig, you have delivered a fine lesson in physics here! In all seriousness though, I love the way you have woven the facts with your own personal loss. |
by CJ Maleney
Cheers dude. Glad you liked |