by Mark Oct 23, 2017
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Often on the river embankment I observe the same stately white Swan |
by Scott Cole
Love this Mark my man, u do have a way with words. Wish I could express my poems more like this!!!! Great job |
by Em
Just beautiful |
by Ya----Na
Mark, you always touch our hearts with the beautiful imaginary you create. |
by mossgirl19
Ahh your beautiful language in here left me in deep silence as I feel line by line the sadness you are dealing with. The ending line...awww, it was the most hurtful of all. |
by Brenda
Mark, such a beautifully sad write. So much longing for that lost mate, written with the beauty of the lone swan on the river. Hugs to you- |