Starry Night

by Kitty Cat Lady   Oct 24, 2017


I slip into your inky blackness
You steal away my despair
I'm weightless yet supported
You surround me, close as air

I'm free but yet I'm carried
A willing slave to your tide
Taken where the moon directs
And where the wind decides

I feel the ripples through you
Your silky surface I caress
Flowing seamlessly around me
As you ebb away my stress

You rock me within your embrace
I float in body and mind
The night, the stars, me and you
So perfectly entwined.

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  • 7 years ago

    by Scott Cole

    I really like this it's such a beautifully flowing poem, no pun intended, lol

    • 7 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Haha ... pun away! Thanks so much Scott :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 7 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    The night, the stars, me and you
    So perfectly entwined.

    And so perfectly rhymed as well.
    Kitty, a very Beautiful poem.
    Deserves to be among the stars next week.

    • 7 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      aw lovely comments, thanks Shane :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    Miss Kitty K

    your rhyming and flow is your trademark, and again with this piece has your name not just within but all over it too. A wonderful poem and pleased it has been nominated
    much love
    Michael x :)

    • 7 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Aw such lovely comments Michael, thank you :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Kitty, such a beautiful write! This just flowed so smooth, like water....lovely!

    • 7 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Lovely comments, thanks so much Brenda :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Another fabulous write with brilliant, flawless rhyming as ever

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