Comments : Red Eyes

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Ohhhh..red eyes following you! Such an interesting tale, I was thrilled reading it.

    One little thing, in the 8th stanza I think it should be 'the story was only a tale'.

    You're a fab story-teller.

    • 7 years ago

      by words2myself

      Thank you mossgirl.

      I missed that mistake when re reading the poem before posting it and I have corrected it now. Thanks for pointing it out.