Trickle

by CJ Maleney   Oct 25, 2017


I am a little rivulet
I am not yet thought of as a stream
I bubble over stone and rocks
Down hills I pick up speed

My area increases now
As others join my flow
I will rest in ponds and lakes
But there is so much further still to go

I am now the mighty river
I no longer flow over land
I carve my path into it
I hydrate both beast and man

My journey is now over
I have become all that I can be
I started out as trickle

I AM NOW THE ROARING SEA

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  • 7 years ago

    by Alice

    Really like this one!

  • 7 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Loved this and the way the little droplet grows slowly as it journeys into the sea. Very clever and captivating piece. Milly x

    • 7 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Morning Milly

      Glad you enjoyed, quite a simple little poem really

      Craig x

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    I love this too, Craig. Life's a journey, along the way we grow into better versions of our selves...or we make something out of the very tiny bits of what we have. Being the sea now I guess you mean to say you are now an overcomer. :-)

    • 7 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thank you Mel. This one isn't really about me.

      It's about people, and how as a collective they become way stronger and more powerful than they ever would be as an individual.

      Craig x

  • 7 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Craig - wonderful, wonderful *claps*
    This is amazing and full of metaphores yet also very cute ...
    Love it! Well done.

  • 7 years ago

    by stormingdance (Lessa)

    Lovely, clever, effervescent write! Love love this poem!

    • 7 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thank you.

      I've not seen your profile before but when time allows I'll have a read of your stuff

      Craig

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