Wow Craig! This is powerful stuff and could have so many hidden meanings pertaining to perhaps, powerful people too. I guess we all begin as rivulets, but few make it to the sea ... and what do they do with that power once they get there? |
by CJ Maleney
Thank you. |
by CJ Maleney
Thanks Ben. |
by Ben Pickard
Craig, I love this! It is the little things and experiences we accumulate throughout the years (or tributaries) that make us stronger. (Roaring seas). I don't know whether the metaphors I have highlighted were meant or whether this is just a fun poem, but that's what I'm taking...so there! |
Lovely, clever, effervescent write! Love love this poem! |
by CJ Maleney
Thank you. |
Craig - wonderful, wonderful *claps* |
by mossgirl19
I love this too, Craig. Life's a journey, along the way we grow into better versions of our selves...or we make something out of the very tiny bits of what we have. Being the sea now I guess you mean to say you are now an overcomer. :-) |
by CJ Maleney
Thank you Mel. This one isn't really about me. |
Loved this and the way the little droplet grows slowly as it journeys into the sea. Very clever and captivating piece. Milly x |
by CJ Maleney
Morning Milly |
by Alice
Really like this one! |