by mossgirl19 Oct 26, 2017
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Like a reflex, my eyes would gaze at the moon at night, |
by Brenda
Lady Mel, I just love this! When we are in a relationship there are so many things that are just you and him. When that relationship is no longer our minds still keep those loops going. I really liked how you repeated certain phrases and certain words. It really lends well with your write- |
by BlueJay
While I am definitely not a fan of the repetition (it was a little too bland to really get at the heart of where you were going in my opinion) at the beginning of so many stanzas I think this is still a decently penned poem and I wish you well in the weekly contest. |
by mossgirl19
I really like your honesty, Maddie. Thank you. |
by Ya----Na
Beautiful Mel |
by Mark
Mel this is wonderful, I love the repetition. ..the nostaligia..the love expressed. Beautiful! |
by Ben Pickard
Clever writing, Mel. |