Freezed Moment

by Mohan   Oct 26, 2017


Your smiling face
Reminds me of a blooming flower..,
my time filled with beauty...

And I start to believe that
Running moments
Can be paused.

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  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Mohan, it's great to read a new post from you. I like the impression left by this little poem. Capturing the very small moments, take for instance the smile here, and your world freezing to that moment just to bask in it...it's a beautiful scene. I really like the word 'running' to describe moments because everything seems to run these days. It goes to say we can still pause for beautiful moments in our lives if we choose to. Lovely piece.

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Beautiful. I wish I had more nominations, but I am all out this week.

    Take care,

    Ben