Crikey Michael!
Firstly, I had to look up that first word ... I love being educated :-)
Secondly .... in my mind, you just painted Monet's 'water lilies' with words! It's all I could think about as I read it ... I'm assuming that was your intention?
Another blissfully romantic and swoon-worthy work of art. Added to faves you genius! :-) x
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Oh la la... Michael, first of all I really like that this is left aligned. This is so beautiful. The structure is captivating...as it controlled the pace by which this is read. I love how the words slowly unfold, as Kitty puts it, this is swoon-worthy. Genius, yes...or shall I say 'old' genius. Loved it! It's perfect actually. :-)

Michael I do believe without a doubt that this poem ur beautiful mind has crafted is the most tranquil poem I have read on this site, it's just simply moving. If I had a vote I would nominate it in a second. Awesome job man i dont know how a mind could could up with such effervescent thoughts my hat is off to u man!!!!

Michael, the imagery! I cannot add anymore, Scotts comment is spot on.

WOW. that is all

Michael, just lovely! The visuals you wove are breathtaking. Well done-