by deeplydesturbed Oct 27, 2017
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Drinking alone on a Friday night |
by Em
A very well done acrostic which is emotional, powerful and somewhat saddening but it's extremely well with the rhyming too.. Mr Darcy once said acrostics are hard when done well but to rhyme them too is astoundingly difficult (or something along those lines) you did both so in Brendas words "you nailed it" |
thanks em |
by Ya----Na
Naomi, well |
Thanks Free Verse!!!!! |
by Maher
You know, USB, there's a story I once heard about a man going through troubles of his own. |
Not sh**%y thanks SC |
Excellent expressed and keep on writing. There is hope. All the very best. |
Thanks Dagmar |
by mossgirl19
It really appears that the opportunity to drink comes right in front of you when you are trying to avoid it as much as possible, Nams. Do not worry so much, as things will be better soon. As Brenda puts it, step forward and backward but you are definitely going there. |
It does seem like that doesnt it.. |