Comments : Thirst for Love

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Hello, Kasie. Once again you have done magic with your beautiful rhyming. This was a full pleasure to read, the rhymes being so natural flowing and not a tiny bit forced.

    The last line for me could do without "that's".
    'Full of pleasures pure and truly free.'

    I felt her plight...sometimes all we could ever want is to experience something genuine like love. :-)

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you, I'll work on the last line and see what I can do. To be honest, I wasn't sure about it either.

  • 7 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    A thirst for love beautifully expressed Kasie! :-) A truly lovely and relatable poem.
    =^.^=

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you : )