Comments : My umbrella

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    When we find someone like this, we are lucky indeed. Well expressed.

    And I am left humming Rihanna's 'umbrella' as I leave the page...

    Take care

    • 7 years ago

      by Beautiful Tragedy

      Ben,
      I was doing the exact same thing when I was done writing the poem lmao.
      But once again thank you, you are always active with my writing and your feedback has always been helpful.

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    Beautiful T

    Such a heart- felt piece from you, that captures your trust in someone and be able to talk to them about anything that is on your mind. It so difficult when others are unavailable for what ever reasons, and the need for someone to be there at times.
    A nice flow with your emotions and the ending says no matter what there is shelter.
    I really enjoyed this piece and worthy of my nomination :0
    Much love
    Michael x :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    BT, I am jealous of you.
    I wish I had someone with a listening ear.

    • 7 years ago

      by Beautiful Tragedy

      I’m always here, free verse. Send me a message anytime you need and I’ll do the whatever I can to help.