Blood Test

by Alice   Oct 30, 2017


The twelve-inch needle stuck deep,
with my thinning skin sucked around it
as if deflating,
trapping the silver sheen of icy steel
beneath a flimsy paper of flesh,
mortified with scraps of heavy crust-ridged cuts
and burns like pools still oozing,
spewing slimy moisture like a split sewage pipe.
My blood lurked far beneath that soil of volcanic skin,
and so the thick and prying pin tip
was plunged in to the river-veins of my hip.
The scratcher tore up pale craters from the cutis,
pulsed humming pains from hip to hand to foot-
yet still my boiling cruor stayed its course,
that latent brook still babbling,
triumphant beneath the surface.

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  • 7 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    OUCH Alice! That's one BIG needle!! Is this for bone marrow extraction? You have described everything painfully brilliantly and I winced as I read it. Well done! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 7 years ago

      by Alice

      It was about a time when I had a blood test after sustaining some injuries, but no blood would come out! They ended up having to try putting the needle in lots of different spots to find blood. Thanks for the praise, I will make sure to check out your poems!