by Scott Cole
Great poem Kitty Cat, love the title and ur rhyme is on point. That last tear sometimes are so hard to let go!!!!! |
Thanks so much Scott :-) x |
by MoonMaiden
Sometimes tears for someone else were never worth it but the emotion in this plays well with the story it tells. Obvious it's their loss & those tears made you stronger. This is another brilliant peice Cat! |
Thanks so much for your lovely comments ... I'm all good now ;-) x |
by Ben Pickard
Kitty, people always think the grass is greener, don't they? Unfortunately, they miss so much that is important while looking for those greener pastures, and miss the fact that theirs is the lushest after all. |
Very true Ben! Thanks so much for your comments :-) x |
by Michael
Miss Kitty K, |
Lovely comments as always Michael, thanks so much :-) x |
Kitty |
Aw thanks so much Nams, I really appreciate that :-) x |
by Mark
Sad and a very well rhymed poem ...'you have wrung me completely dry' |
Thanks so much Mark :-) x |
by CRAFTY KEN
Very nice work Kitty, I like your style, especially the unforced rhyming, it flows through the events of two lovers and sadly as written, one loved less. The message can be related to by many and the one's who lost the love suffer the most. |
That's a huge compliment, thanks so much Ken :-) x |
by Brenda
Amen Kitty! He doesn't deserve your attention or love and certainly not anymore of your tears. I have been there myself and I haven't looked back. Well done on this. |
Thanks so much Brenda, I'm looking forward to the next bit! :-) x |
by Ya----Na
I guess we are lucky because you never miss to love your fellow poets. |
Thanks for your lovely comments as always Shane :-) x |
I need to keep it to my favorites. ???????? |
That's a lovely compliment, thanks so much Lyn :-) x |