You did a great job expressing your feelings, BJ.... this does NOT suck!!

Poems don't always have to rhyme or have a certain rhythm... lots of people write free verse.

But if you want to make a more traditional type poem, take all these feeling you have written down and find a common thread (the common thread I see here is that you always ask a question) Put those questions at the beginning of each line... that will give it a form... Here is a suggestion for the first few stanzas…..if you want more help, feel free to email me

What do you do…
When someone you hate
Needs a friend too?

What do you say…
When the one that you love
Doesn’t feel the same way?

What should you do…
When life seems to end
Is death overdue?

that was a gr8 poem bj and ann marie that was also good.