tornado

by Something Strange   Nov 3, 2017


you are like a tornado coursing through my body
tearing up my heart
leaving me
fallen apart.

it hurts,
you looking at me.
after how bad you have treated me
i just can't believe
that you left
me

~~ Something Strange ~~

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  • 7 years ago

    by Sive Klaas

    "it hurts,
    you looking at me.
    after how bad you have treated me."

    i have been reading all your poems. how your writings are constructed, how you often epress your feelings. it sounds like you have divided your age. you good lady. i love your works.

  • 7 years ago

    by MoonMaiden

    Simple but yet so much heartfelt pain radiates reading this. So sorry.

    • 7 years ago

      by Jo Pembleton

      this is from my other account but thank you

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    When love does this to you, there is nothing more unbearable in the world is there?

    Take care and all the very best,

    Ben

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