Alice, this is creepy! A dark psychological tale.

This is amazing in its sheer brutality. It's an incredible write and the end sent me into a cold shiver. I will nominate this on Monday when my votes are charged.

Really well done and all the very best,

Ben

Such a maneuver of talent. The talent of this piece reminds me of Kafka's stories. But here the darkness is even more incurable than his. It is so magnificently ominous and suicidal that I can not even bear the thought of remembering it. It touches the ultimate points of melancholy in ones psyche. Maybe it is just me but this simply frightens me.
Though Alice talent wise you are up, up there!!

This is deep and it is close to home. Excellent write. All the best

Alice, your descriptions are so good that I could see this grisly scene only too well. Very dark and very good! :-)
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