This is very sad and I hope you are ok. When love ends yes it does hurt but is it worth to end our lives? There is love out there waiting for you. All the very best Hugs |
by mossgirl19
A wonderful melancholic write. The beautiful tone and nice flow made it a good read. I think to will fit well instead of and in this line from the second stanza: |
by Brenda
Naazz, such a sad write. This really is so beautiful though. I love the way you worded each stanza, so much longing and melancholy. Lost relationships are awful, our hearts are broken, our world is turned upside down. You really have touched on this perfectly. I'm sorry you are going through this. Hugs my friend- |
by Matt Carroll
Sad, but beautifully done. |
by BlueJay
This seems like a piece everyone (poet) wrote at some point in middle or high school, but despite the cliche nature, you still put a personal spin on it that I appreciated. |
by naaz
Blue Jay, you are right it is cliché in nature. |