Mobile as peas on a child's plate
Beautiful

Some excellent writing here, not least the line Paul has highlighted.

Well done and welcome to the site,

Ben

I loved your desciptives! So much said in so few words. Well done and welcome to P &Q-

So much said in so few words. Well done.

this might be short but this it is extremely powerful. welcome aboard

The opening line was incredible, it totally pulled me in and the word choice here was definitely powerful. Nicely done for such a simple write, you're really captured not only your emotions but something so overwhelming on the page.

A striking piece, short but definitely impressed something. Congrats on the win!

Congratulations on the win!

Congratulations on your front page :)
Michael

Congratulations! :-)
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Congrats on your ein

Congratulations on your win! This really was awesome!

Congratulations on the win! Well-deserved!
-Emily

This really is an excellent write, Beautiful metaphors and imagery.

Judging comment:

I am in lack of words to describe the beauty I see in this writing so I'll keep my words short just like your short and crisp poem.
In very few words you gained the attention of your reader and delivered your thought and message precisely. Your description of emotions as mobile and undependable and following it, your usage of perfect similes is remarkable. An extremely beautiful write.