Comments : Coming home to you

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Sorry for the double post.

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    This brought some tears in my eyes. What a heart touching write.

    • 7 years ago

      by TheDarkCloudBehindthePoet

      Thank you for taking the time to read it and I'm happy it touched you. I was in tears writing it, but that's when the purest form of poetry is written in my opinion. And no worries on the double post.

  • 7 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This is wonderful coming home for good. Very touching. All the very best.

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    a very emotional piece

  • 7 years ago

    by BlueJay

    The story here is not so personal that we wear your shoes, but it is well enough written in its vagueness that so many people can relate to it in their own way. I love your voice in this piece, however, I must say the flow was a little choppy - maybe because you got so carried away with the message?

    • 7 years ago

      by TheDarkCloudBehindthePoet

      Thank you for taking the time out to comment on my poem. I glad you liked it. As far as the choppyness is concerned. With certain poems I'm more focused on it but with this one, I just had a heavy heart and was an emotional state. So I just wrote down what came to me in its rawest form. Thank you again ;)