Comments : More Beautiful Than You Know

  • 7 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Taking a little time out as I've a heart to win and lives to rebuild, but I'll leave you with this for now.

    You guys are amazing

    Catch ya's on the flip side

    Craig

  • 7 years ago

    by Mark

    That is one special person at the receiving end of this wonderful love poem.
    The rhyming and flow seems effortless. Very hard to do, great one mate!

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    so very beautiful and touching

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Craig, awww. So romantically beautiful.

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A lovely write, Craig. Truly.

    All the best,

    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Awww Craig,what a heartfelt and sincere write. As we age we tend to dwell on those lines and bumps we didn't have when we were in our prime. Plus we get bogged down in day to day stuff. It truly is wonderful when someone who cares for us deeply reminds us of how special we are to them. Well done -

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    Craig

    This poem reflects your emotions with love, and in way with a lovely flow and rhyme.
    It is a wonderful heart-felt piece from you and gets my vote for nomination fella :)
    Well done
    Michael

  • 7 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Thank you all so much, my intention was to bow out for a little while, but you kinda get pulled back in when every thing goes quiet.

    I am taking a little siesta though! I've priorities I need to take care of, so won't be writing much for a wiggle. (Not a type error)

    Take care all

    Craig

  • 7 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Aw Craig ... what woman wouldn't want to hear this! It's beautiful and so heartfelt and romantic. Love it! :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 7 years ago

    by Ali Maleney

    Wonderful words from a wonderful man
    Love you x x

    • 7 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      As I do you, Welcome to my secret garden of words, reflection and release.

      By both myself and many many others here, you will read words of sorrow, depression, addiction, suffering and hurt. You will also read many things of love and inspiration.

      I've written poems for years and they've all been locked away. This site is a way to set them free.

      I hope you treasure it as much as I do.

      Welcome aboard xxx

  • 7 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Beautiful!