A very well crafted prayer. I do like your words, great write.

Although our religions may differ (Muslim), it's nice to see some poetry about it - especially one so sincere in a world that's slowly forgetting what religion is.

That aside though; I really liked this. It may not follow rules of syllables, structure and blah blah, but the rhyme is there and it's beautiful. It's heartfelt and deep and I believe that it hit me harder than others because I've been doing the same thing you've described here for a while now. Here is something I read that sums it up nicely:

"And therefore will the Lord wait, that he may be gracious unto you, and therefore will He be exalted, that He may have mercy upon you: for the Lord is a God of justice: blessed are all they that wait for Him" - Isiah 30:18

Thank you for sharing your work with us all :)

I love religious poems not enough around for me
Well written