by Paul Hirst Nov 8, 2017
category :
Life, society /
about society
I don't like custard |
by BlueJay
I love the flow of this piece and how you used such interesting stanzas to get your point across. Nicely penned. |
by Paul Hirst
Thank You Bluejay |
by Brenda
Amen brother Paul! Well stated, loved this! |
by Paul Hirst
Thank You Brenda |
This is brilliant! I actually think homophobia is a very useful filter in immediately weeding out the idiots that I'd want nothing to do with ... anyone secure with their own sexuality doesn't give a flying fig about how someone else prefers to have sex! |
by Paul Hirst
Your to kind KCL thank you that's very nice of you and I agree with you regarding people you don't need around you |
by Mark
I really enjoyed this and the title. Great message! |
by Paul Hirst
Thanks Mark Appreciate your comments cheers |
by Em
ok this is fun because of all the differences which makes a less boring life, the rhyming is smooth and the punch line pretty powerful which is why it'll get my nomination as we may all be different but as you say why all this hatred?? you don't see illnesses discriminating |
by Paul Hirst
That's True discrimination is a human illness im sure Em |