Birthdays

by deeplydesturbed   Nov 10, 2017


Birthdays are
Interestingly yet boringly
Repetitive once
The person has aged
Honourably with
Dignity and respect
And become wise beyond their
Years lived on earth
Surrounded by loved ones

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  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Nicely done Nams! You really put this acrostic together beautifully. Hugs and birthday greetings too.

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    Miss nams,

    You are surpassing yourself with acrostic style. And this is brilliant
    well done
    Much love
    Michael :)x

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A very clever acrostic, Naomi. Well thought out and executed.

    Well done and all the best as ever,

    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Had to read over and over. To me this is one clever write and so true. Add to my favorite. Take care

  • 7 years ago

    by Mark

    I reread this over again, it resonates. Great acrostic

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