Brilliant poem, great rhyming Michael, flowing exceptionally well.

Wow Michael this is deep and my take on this sounds like hurt and betrayal. Cutting the diamond it could mean either way. Forgiveness is a slow process. We all have a past but we should come clean when with the right one. I may be completely wrong but this write I had to read over. All the very best hugs

A clever write. I like how you have used the previous to progress onwards. Beautiful.
Catherine x

Your writes are always so varied and well executed, Michael. A real treat to read.

All the very best,

Ben

Very well written, Mr Michael. I really enjoyed this one - especially the very last verse:

'I’ve cut the diamond-
from your
flaw!'

That's a great line!

Stay safe and keep writing, my friend :)

Aw brilliant Michael! I just love the way you've expressed what you gained from something bad. It's so clever! :-) x
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