by Mark Nov 13, 2017
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I behest a star that caught my eye; |
by Brenda
Lovely, just lovely. I felt your longing for your loved one who was no longer there. Hugs- |
Excellent piece Marky |
by Ben Pickard
Super work. Really wonderful writing. |
by Michael
Mark |
Thou Mark ... so so sad. Your use of classic English is perfectly demonstrated in this truly poignant piece. Brilliant! :-) x |