Mark, this just compelled me to say please consider publishing a poetry book. Wow, it seems Poe's blood is running in your veins. I am beginning to wonder if you are indeed a time traveller. The old language here is killing me, I love it so very much.

Thou Mark ... so so sad. Your use of classic English is perfectly demonstrated in this truly poignant piece. Brilliant! :-) x
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Mark

a truly wonderful piece, your use of poetic language is lovely to read

Michael :)

Super work. Really wonderful writing.

Excellent piece Marky

Lovely, just lovely. I felt your longing for your loved one who was no longer there. Hugs-