Awwww. The hurt in here is so perfectly expressed, Mark. Ahhhh. Beautiful and painful. I just adore the beautiful tones of your pieces, this one took me back to A Winter Night, where I felt an intrinsic beauty in the sombre lines. Really well crafted.

Applause! Mark this is fab ... unrequited love is pants eh? :-) x
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A very romantic piece Mark, with such a sad end to your poem. Wonderful imagery as ever.

The only slight feel I had reading this Mark is it lost its flow a little at times, purely from my perspective :)
But really enjoyed the theme
Michael :)

aww Marky - very romantic. whomever this is for should ditch the other!!
this is worthy of their time!!

Wonderful imagery. im glad its nominated.