A hard hitting piece...expressed in such a gripping and eloquent way. This is the state of the world, and this void, it seems it will remain there forever. It is the sad reality you and I have to wake up to.

I hope this makes the front page; it is a thoroughly engaging and moving piece of poetry.

All the very best to you,

Ben

Simply amazing piece :)

Michael x :)

Wow! Such a relevant write about today's world. So well done-

I am speechless and can't say anything else that hadn't been said just wow

Achingly sad, but I always try to remember that the love still ouweighs the hate in this beautiful world :-) x
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I love the structure of ths poem. It was very easy to read. I fully understand the way you feel, as i feel this way everyday. There is so much hate in this world and all we need is love. I think all we can do is spread the love.