Evading sleep

by deeplydesturbed   Nov 14, 2017


Sleepless yet again
Looking at the clock
Endless days turn to night
Evading dreams again
Please help me drift off soon

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  • 7 years ago

    by Maher

    Insomnia is that troll who keeps you up when you need sleep and calls the Sandman over when you're stuck in traffic on the way home from work. I'll admit though, sometimes it has its uses, but I dislike it like I dislike coriander.

    I like it here though, because this is a good write :)

    • 7 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      thanks SC - Also we must talk later. Im afraid im busy with work at this very moment, but i do require your honest advice and i am ready to hear it all..

    • 7 years ago

      by Maher

      No probs, all you need to do is text me :)

    • 7 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      I shall :)

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Oh my...insomniacs gather round...haha. I love this very much Nams. I saw myself in it, added to faves. Lovely acrostic, you and Michael are obsessed with it. You come up with amazing ones.

  • 7 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    You are so obsessed with acrostics lol

    Go to sleep!

    • 7 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      haha To be fair, I wrote this before we bid good night :P

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Nicely done acrostic Nams! I hope one of these days,you find that magic formula to sleep. Hugs-

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    Nams

    a great acrostic from you again, shame it one that is a bugbear
    Much love
    Michael x :)

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