the fluency and straightforwardness makes this piece very strong
I enjoy to see your relationship with the truth always comes first

:( beautiful write Mel

Indeed Mel ... words of love should always be genuine! Love this :-) x
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A sad and wistful sort of write, Mel, that didn't cheer my morning at all, I have to say... lol

Take care and all the best,

Ben

Lady Mel, a sad write indeed. So many people throw love around a bit too lightly. I'm sorry you had to be on the receiving end of that. Hugs my friend-

Miss Mel,

the hurt we live with, and the consequences of truth can be hard on us. But at least its the truth :)
A nice piece from you, that flowed really well, albeit with sadness
Much love
Michael x:)

Oh I love this, Mel! I missed reading your amazing poems! Well done! I'm so glad to see this nominated!