The Meeting

by Anna Banasiak   Nov 20, 2017




I was looking for God
in the echo of the waves
I heard
the music of things
the light of the sea
filled me
with tranquility

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  • 6 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I am not usually a fan of pieces like this, for many reasons, but this one was simple and yet beautiful enough to pill me in anyway. I suppose God could be taken as any number of things for all walks of life and so could the rhythm of the music mentioned midway, which gave this piece an interesting quality of uniqueness - yet still remains personal to you (I'm sure). So nicely penned.

  • 7 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    So glad this is nominated. Not normally a fan of shorts! However this one is in my calls park so I get it.

    Craig

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    I think you find God in so many places. I loved your visuals with this . I too take great solace in the water.

  • 7 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Peaceful comfort comes to mind...this is beautiful

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