The mind is something else and often plays a trick on us. These short lines are very powerful and it can be taken either way. I hope it is nothing serious and rather funny. All the best to you.

Nice little senryu/syntuit here, Mel. I relate to this one although I would never go and see a doctor...heaven knows what they would find wrong in my mind!

Take care

I wonder if what is wrong - is wrongly beautiful? Beautiful mind you have.

very clever little piece of writing Miss Mel :)x

Loved this Mel! I think most Drs would find interesting things going about in our noggins lol.

Enjoyable, Good writing!
-Emily

I love your ability to tell so much with just a few lines...