Awakening

by Mortal Utopia   Nov 22, 2017


You were the stranger I saw
amongst the echoes of my dreams.

Your face, your voice –
I’m starting to forget them now,
as you fade, clothed in the fog of sleep.

So I guess,
I’ve disappeared
from your world now -

that strange, half-constructed world
abandoned in a forgotten corner of my mind.

When I cross the bridge of sleep
and dream,
the places on the other side
are never the same -

except for the feint scent of nostalgia...

I really thought it was real,
until it ceased being real,
and had never been real.

Somehow, waking felt like a leap of faith
gone horribly wrong.

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  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Awww. MU, this is beautifully heart wrenching!!! I like the metaphor of dreams, when you thought it was real when it was never. You took me to dimensions. That ending, wow. I wish this is nominated!

  • 6 years ago

    by Risqué

    This is beautiful. I was held captive for the entire read, and love the last line: ' Somehow, waking felt like a leap of faith gone horribly wrong.'

    So true sometimes.

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