Bloomin heck Alice! This is just fantastic! I love how your twisty mind works! A sordid tale of greed ... I really hope this gets nominated :-) x
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Alice

Again a truly wonderful piece of writing. You have a clever mind with poetry, and make it look easy. I admire your work
Well done
Michael :)x

This is a personal favorite of mine that you've written!
-Emily

Alice, wow! I am totally in awe of this dark and clever piece! This is really an outstanding work. Kudos!